I will not stop

I will not stop

A Poem by stars are far

I will keep waiting for you

As long as I’m breathing

 

I will keep waiting for you

As long as my blood is moving …

 

I will keep waiting for you

As long as I’m alive …

 

I’ll keep writing for you

Till my hands get paralyzed …

And my mouth can’t speak

And I can’t listen ..

 

I’ll keep dreaming of you

Till my dreams come true

And I hold your hands forever

Till you let me take you

And escape to the land of I’m satisfied …

 

I’ll keep loving you

Not till I die

But till my heart dies

And my soul raise

And my years fades

After that day

I will itch on your heart

I always loved you

and I will never hate you

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
For you ~s~
i love you and i will always do
hope you like this all
enjoy

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A beautiful dedication of your love and devotion to the one who has your heart..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved this, you are very devoted and it shows. It was truly beautiful and sweet.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem. very sweet and beautiful.... ^^,

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very devoted and lovable picture is your poem conveying...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem about undying devotion. I loved reading this especially this part "I'll keep writing for you till my hand get paralyzed." This line and all its variations were able to describe your love and dedication. I really enjoyed this. Great Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


*EXPLOSION!!!!!!* thats u blowing my mind with love, passion, deepness, and remarkable persistance :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Stunning!! I love this piece so much. Full of love and passion. I can relate and this was a joyful read. Thanks for writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved this!!!!!!! :)
Such a great poem !
._. and I loved how you repeated some lines...
Great poem! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I just love the quality of your poems never drops, jus so good and perfect. The emotions are extraordinary and

I’ll keep dreaming of you
Till my dreams come true
And I hold your hands forever
Till you let me take you
And escape to the land of I’m satisfied …

How you come up with such stanzas takes my breath away :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


A committment between one self and another from a special place found nowhere else but in a sense of the true.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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