Thank you

Thank you for crafting your shirt

From my skin ..

 

Thank you for building your house

From my bones ..

 

Thank you for making your pillow

From my lungs …

 

Thank you for decorating your room

By my lips …

 

Thank you for making your shoes

From my nails ..

 

Thank you for making the Curtains

From my hair ..

 

Thank you for glowing the lamp

By my heart ..

 

I really thank you

Because when i died

I was dedicating my dead body

Only for helping you

That is why I’m dying restly

Because when I'm dead I'm beside you ..

I adore you

11/8/2011

11:50 pm

Author's Note

also dedicated for the one i love and will always ~s~
hope you like that :)

Reviews

[EMF]

Very strage view on love. Borderline obsessive. Facinating take on the idea.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sweet and heartfelt.

[AndyJCash]

There's something quite haunting about this and yet I can't help but feel there was supposed to be something affectionate in there. It's weird, in a good way, and I'm still trying to decide what I think about this poem, and I like poems that make me think.

[WriteWiz99]

Great and weird

[Sleeping Maiden]

Wow. Beautiful. Deep and a bit creepy. lol. To have the dead around the house in that matter would be kind of frightening. But I like your view on this piece. Fascinating and emotional. =D Nicely done! I like it.

[Dayran]

Quite a staggering perception. A subtle mix between the individual and the great mother of the world.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A fine write indeed, that is powerful and intense, great :)

[GlamGirl]

This is a really powerful write :) Amazing emotion is conveyed here!
Great poem!

[Thea]

Oh, wondering if that "~s~" is the first name of your loved one...Haha!
Anyway, wonderful poem...Neatly penned though I find it hard to read some lines...Algerian is hard to read if small...Never mind, I still read it... :)