beside me

I couldn’t believe

What I’m passing through

No holds to hold

It was only  you..

 

I couldn’t find

Someone like you my friend

To support me

And stop my tears from falling ..

 

You are so great

My real angel

My great friend ..

 

I owe you

My happiness

My laughs in this moment

I dedicate this for you

Every laugh

And every smile

My great friend

10/8/2011

10:08 PM

Author's Note

i wrote this for a friend hope you like this
and please give me a good title :)
enjoy :)

Reviews

[Dayran]

What we sometimes seek with great earnestness is right there next to us. Makes for a curious discovery.

[Thea]

Wow! Sweet... :)))
I can see a deep creativity here...Great job... :)))

[Hotwater]

Nice tribute.
*bird*

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

It's really nice...

[Lily Mae]

Very beautiful..x

[Becky C Strukamp]

Its lovely.

[Sweets]

This is great!
I loved the font and how you mixed brown and green together.
This is so loving and sweet :)
Nice work! :D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another top write from you, just oozes warmth through and through, love it!! Title sounds good to me, maybe "my angel beside me" or even "my shadow beside me" although shadow isn't mentioned in the poem, but hey my title suggestions aren't great lol

[Sakib]

This is amazing!! Full of emotions. I think the title is good. I hope your friend loves it. :)