I do love you

I do love you

A Poem by stars are far



Thousands of words should be said

To tell you what you mean to me …

One second can be enough

For me to sink in our eyes …

Billions of lives must be spent

For me to forget those beautiful eyes …

 

How could you believe that I forgot you ?

How could you think that I can ignore you ?

How could you feel that I will leave you ?

How could you believe that I don’t adore you ?

 

You really don’t know me

You need all your life to get my thoughts

You need a century to know me ..

 

I knew you from the first look

I can know what do you think of for your eyes

I can know what you want to do if I just look at you

 

But the only thing that I couldn’t knew

Why do  you hate me while I’m into you ?

Why you don’t think about me while this is the only thing that I do?

Why do you love yourself more than you love me ?

 

Don’t you know that you are my star

Don’t you know that you are my oxygen

Don’t you know that you are my soul

Don’t you know that you are my heart beat

Don’t you know that I’m in love with you

DON’T YOU KNOW THAT



I ADORE YOU

© 2011 stars are far


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It is just sensational just how you write such awesome love, heartbreak and romantic poems,

"Thousands of words should be said
To tell you what you mean to me …
One second can be enough
For me to sink in our eyes …
Billions of lives must be spent
For me to forget those beautiful eyes "

Just the beginning alone is so perfect and the rest carries it through. Top write again :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love ... a bend of passion and pain... Adoration and suffering... A beautiful toxic breeze that kills us for we lose in heavens. Love... and everyone has his own definition for what love is... You shared a personal experience through a well written poem, haunted by millions of emotions and romance in the most lines. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


omggg i can relate to this sooo well
My fav line "dont you know that im in love with you" its my fav cause im like asking myself and 'him' that all the time. You did a great job exspressing your feelings, keep it upp:)

*sugar*

Posted 13 Years Ago


Another beautiful and tender poem filled with romance and adoration. Loved it. Well penned.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a sweet and sincere write. Like the way you have this set up. Love the last verse. This is wonderful.....xo

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this! So romantic! The wording is fab. Awesome write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow.. dang. I love it a lot!! You write so well it truely shows the feelings the reader gets as one reads. =D Beautiful work! Its very relatable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is just sensational just how you write such awesome love, heartbreak and romantic poems,

"Thousands of words should be said
To tell you what you mean to me …
One second can be enough
For me to sink in our eyes …
Billions of lives must be spent
For me to forget those beautiful eyes "

Just the beginning alone is so perfect and the rest carries it through. Top write again :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unrequited love... I LOVE IT!!!!! I can relate to this poem.... tnx for the RR ^^,

Posted 13 Years Ago



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