I do love you

Thousands of words should be said

To tell you what you mean to me …

One second can be enough

For me to sink in our eyes …

Billions of lives must be spent

For me to forget those beautiful eyes …

 

How could you believe that I forgot you ?

How could you think that I can ignore you ?

How could you feel that I will leave you ?

How could you believe that I don’t adore you ?

 

You really don’t know me

You need all your life to get my thoughts

You need a century to know me ..

 

I knew you from the first look

I can know what do you think of for your eyes

I can know what you want to do if I just look at you

 

But the only thing that I couldn’t knew

Why do  you hate me while I’m into you ?

Why you don’t think about me while this is the only thing that I do?

Why do you love yourself more than you love me ?

 

Don’t you know that you are my star

Don’t you know that you are my oxygen

Don’t you know that you are my soul

Don’t you know that you are my heart beat

Don’t you know that I’m in love with you

DON’T YOU KNOW THAT

I ADORE YOU

Author's Note

hope you like this :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

It is just sensational just how you write such awesome love, heartbreak and romantic poems,

"Thousands of words should be said
To tell you what you mean to me …
One second can be enough
For me to sink in our eyes …
Billions of lives must be spent
For me to forget those beautiful eyes "

Just the beginning alone is so perfect and the rest carries it through. Top write again :)

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

I really enjoy your poem...

[Lily Mae]

I love this.. sometimes they just don't know and you have to scream it lol..xxx

This is a strong and emotional poem. Has a lost in thought rambling feel. I especially like the opening stanza.

[just rose.]

I like the questions. You could spin off a whole other poem just in questions. Since about this kind of stuff, there are so many!

[GlamGirl]

I liked the repetition in this on. Great poem :D

[Hidden_identity]

Very emotional. I really enjoyed it. I especially loved the end.

[Star Wolf]

This is wonderful! Awesome work! You're so right, when we're in love that person becomes are everything and we wonder why they don't notice us. Perhaps they do and are wondering why we don't notice them. You never know.

[deeps]

WOW!!! Such powerful words here. This is wonderful

[Sakib]

Beautiful!! This poem contains so much emotion and adoration. It's really nice. I think it's a great tribute to your loved one. Great job.