Answer me

I always ask you

What do you think of me ?

Do you love poems ?

Who is in your mind ?

What do I mean to you ?

 

I always  ask you that

Because you mean a lot to me

I ask you about poems

Because I only write for you

I love a lot …

 

One more question

I never asked before

What does love mean to you ?

Because when you answer me

I will see the road to your heart

It will be clean and nice

I wish you answer me

And give me a chance to hold your heart …

Author's Note

i wrote this based on my a real emotions and from my real life ..
for me it means a lot of suffering.
Dedicated to the one i always loved ..my true love s..

enjoy that :)

Reviews

[MYSELF]

Stars are far,

I can really well understand the emotions you tried to put in the questions as at this age it might seem obvious to be surrounded by such queries. (NOT THAT I AM MUCH OLDER) Yet even at times I have come across such situation but patience is the only key for love..

The Lines
"Because when you answer me
I will see the road to your heart
It will be clean and nice
I wish you answer me
And give me a chance to hold your heart …"

are perfectly capable of expressing as to what kind of thoughts are being popping up in your brain but love is such a serene thing that if you have believe in your love you would find answers to all the questions within yourself...

May You and Your love be together forever...
:D

[M.Babu]

This is extremely moving and sentimental :)

It truly felt heartfelt and original so i applaud this piece:)

Beautifully done!
~M.Babu~

[Hotwater]

A truly gorgeous write, *I will be clean and nice' a super duper line.
Top marks for this wonderful poem.
*bird*

[nevermindfan1991]

Nice, beautiful tribute to your loved one.

[Sakib]

Nice write. Nice way to express your feelings. I hope you find the answers. You are lucky to find true love.
Great job. Thanks for sharing.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, I enjoyed this write.

[Siddharth T]

So amazing! I can clearly see the pain the poem..

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow.. very affectionate. I love it. Simply lovely. I enjoyed reading this. =D
Amazing poem!

[Becky C Strukamp]

You pen the emotion of suffering well. An excellent poem.

[Desmund Tiny]

very beautiful poem.... I like it....