Answer me

Answer me

A Poem by stars are far

I always ask you

What do you think of me ?

Do you love poems ?

Who is in your mind ?

What do I mean to you ?

 

I always  ask you that

Because you mean a lot to me

I ask you about poems

Because I only write for you

I love a lot …

 

One more question

I never asked before

What does love mean to you ?

Because when you answer me

I will see the road to your heart

It will be clean and nice

I wish you answer me

And give me a chance to hold your heart …

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
i wrote this based on my a real emotions and from my real life ..
for me it means a lot of suffering.
Dedicated to the one i always loved ..my true love s..

enjoy that :)

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Stars are far,

I can really well understand the emotions you tried to put in the questions as at this age it might seem obvious to be surrounded by such queries. (NOT THAT I AM MUCH OLDER) Yet even at times I have come across such situation but patience is the only key for love..

The Lines
"Because when you answer me
I will see the road to your heart
It will be clean and nice
I wish you answer me
And give me a chance to hold your heart …"

are perfectly capable of expressing as to what kind of thoughts are being popping up in your brain but love is such a serene thing that if you have believe in your love you would find answers to all the questions within yourself...

May You and Your love be together forever...
:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, this was amazing I enjoyed it a lot. You really expressed your emotions in this write and that made it even more beautiful. Wonderful piece.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Deep and needing answers. I can only hope you get them. Brilliant poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


These are deep questions, drawn from life's experiences. And your hopes for a meaningful response are earnest and heartfelt. I hope you find the answers you seek.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Stars are far,

You are really a great writer that I can see from the poems you wrote.
All lines are wrote by your heart.

Cherry

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sweet poem, just make sure love is the same to both of you :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


aww so sweet yet sad, i can relate to it like alot! loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is an amazing write. The way you worded this and based it on real emotions is actually what I do with my poetry mainly so I get why this poem is so heartfelt and pretty much that your hearts in pain. The wording here is amazing and each line brings a deeper meaning into this. Fab write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful, a beautiful dedication to someone special

Posted 13 Years Ago


So nice and love how you express love so beautifully and romantically, an absolute stunner :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Stars are far,

I can really well understand the emotions you tried to put in the questions as at this age it might seem obvious to be surrounded by such queries. (NOT THAT I AM MUCH OLDER) Yet even at times I have come across such situation but patience is the only key for love..

The Lines
"Because when you answer me
I will see the road to your heart
It will be clean and nice
I wish you answer me
And give me a chance to hold your heart …"

are perfectly capable of expressing as to what kind of thoughts are being popping up in your brain but love is such a serene thing that if you have believe in your love you would find answers to all the questions within yourself...

May You and Your love be together forever...
:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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