Answer me

I always ask you

What do you think of me ?

Do you love poems ?

Who is in your mind ?

What do I mean to you ?

 

I always  ask you that

Because you mean a lot to me

I ask you about poems

Because I only write for you

I love a lot …

 

One more question

I never asked before

What does love mean to you ?

Because when you answer me

I will see the road to your heart

It will be clean and nice

I wish you answer me

And give me a chance to hold your heart …

Author's Note

i wrote this based on my a real emotions and from my real life ..
for me it means a lot of suffering.
Dedicated to the one i always loved ..my true love s..

enjoy that :)

Reviews

[MYSELF]

Stars are far,

I can really well understand the emotions you tried to put in the questions as at this age it might seem obvious to be surrounded by such queries. (NOT THAT I AM MUCH OLDER) Yet even at times I have come across such situation but patience is the only key for love..

The Lines
"Because when you answer me
I will see the road to your heart
It will be clean and nice
I wish you answer me
And give me a chance to hold your heart …"

are perfectly capable of expressing as to what kind of thoughts are being popping up in your brain but love is such a serene thing that if you have believe in your love you would find answers to all the questions within yourself...

May You and Your love be together forever...
:D

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing I enjoyed it a lot. You really expressed your emotions in this write and that made it even more beautiful. Wonderful piece.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[EMF]

Deep and needing answers. I can only hope you get them. Brilliant poem.

[Jeremy Baker]

These are deep questions, drawn from life's experiences. And your hopes for a meaningful response are earnest and heartfelt. I hope you find the answers you seek.

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Stars are far,

You are really a great writer that I can see from the poems you wrote.
All lines are wrote by your heart.

Cherry

[AndyJCash]

Very sweet poem, just make sure love is the same to both of you :)

[sugar]

aww so sweet yet sad, i can relate to it like alot! loved it

[Darkest Rose]

This is an amazing write. The way you worded this and based it on real emotions is actually what I do with my poetry mainly so I get why this poem is so heartfelt and pretty much that your hearts in pain. The wording here is amazing and each line brings a deeper meaning into this. Fab write :)

[Sweets]

This is wonderful, a beautiful dedication to someone special

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So nice and love how you express love so beautifully and romantically, an absolute stunner :)