Love prison

I'm here alone

All I want is you

Is to open the door ..

 

The sky is above

And the ground is my stand

The angels are around

And the devils are under the ground …

 

Open the door

I'm here alone

Not scared

But I’m just falling apart

I want to see you

I would like to heal you..

With a touch or just a kiss

 

Open the door

This prison is killing me

Love prison

I'm begging

Don’t leave me alone

After all this time

I'm so scared

Just because I’m afraid

Not to see you my love again ...

Author's Note

Just came to my mind ...
hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Hotwater]

We've all been to that sort of prison! a smashing "off the cuff" write.
*bird*

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I loved this write.

[Becky C Strukamp]

I Love the title, Love Prison, excellent.

Open the door

This prison is killing me

Love prison


What a unique way of referring to the bonds of love. Excellent write.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Its beautiful. =D it truely shows how a person is afraid and the emotions from it is well done. I love it! I can relate to it. =)

[EMF]

Really nice, simple straightforward love poem. Well written, with good flow and stle. Great, as always

[Thea]

One great poem! I enjoyed reading it! Lovely... :)))