With a look

You hold my hand

And said :

“look toward the sky

Look at the stars

Look at the moon “

And you hugged me

While I was looking at you

And you staring at me …

 

I saw in your eyes

The sky, the stars, the moon

And all the plants …

You whispered :

“ I see a lot of trees

And a small lovely bench

We were sitting at “

 

We are alone

In a small room

But seeing all the world

Not from the window

But in each other’s eyes ..

 

I hold you tier

You hugged me closer

And said together:

“ I adore you my love”

 

This sweet dream

That we are living in

Is the only dream

That I want not to end

Just to be with me

My sweet Romio 

Author's Note

i was just dreaming with this :s
i know it might be somehow wear to dream with ...
hope you like that as i adored it :))

Reviews

[AndyJCash]

Nice write

[Star Wolf]

A very sweet and tender poem. I enjoyed reading this poem as well. You are a very talented writer!

[Thea]

Aw, lovely poem! Colorful too! :)))

[Hotwater]

A fantastic dreamy poem, no person could not enjoy this poem... one of the best poems I've ever read... and I've read a lot! Brilliant!
*bird*

Very interesting, got a floating type feeling from this one. Best lines "But seeing all the world
Not from the window
But in each other’s eyes .."

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

I liked your experiment with the font and colours..!!!


Good write..!!!

[Jeremy Baker]

I liked it, Suhad, very nice.

[Joiedevivre]

What a lovely, sweet daydream! I liked it.

[Lively]

Awesome, full of love..