Our breakup

I thought it would be hurtful

To say Goodbye to your image

I thought it won't be easy

To remove the tree you plant in my heart

I thought it is wrong

To forget you my what ????

 

Many things I thought in my head

But all of them all wrong

After I left you

Or must say

You left me

I realized

that i was stuck in the past

And trying to cover my eyes

On the world's beauty ..

I realized

that I was holding your picture

Not in my eyes

But in my hands

 

I scattered it

I shattered it

I went away

To see the present

But I will never regret

The present's past miss

because I found something more important

I found

  THE REAL ME

29/7/2011

10:34 PM

Author's Note

i hope you like this :)

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

Don't worry about the people in your past. There's a reason they didn't make it to the present. :)
And...no you didn't. You'll fall for someone again and again break - up. That's what makes the world go round :)
Those who are faithful know only the trivial side of love: it is the faithless who know love's tragedies.

[Star Wolf]

This is a really wonderful poem. Great insight. We all must move on but we really never forget the past.

[Dayran]

True love never dies. It fades away until you find it again someday, in the present.

[Akshat♥]

I liked it...
breakups are never easy especially you
loved someone so deeply and truly ..
Keep writing:(

[EMF]

Brilliant. Absolutley brilliant. Great work

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Just love it..!!! Wonderful words..great flow..!!!

Like the font as well..!!!

Wishes and Luck..!!!

[Lively]

People re grieve for what they lost but they never look that there are still many reasons to remain happy. Our life does not contain only one element. Nobody in this world can decide what we are, what we are to be. Its our own will. It is stupid to give away our precious life for someone who don't even care for it.

[Becky C Strukamp]

"I found the real me"

Love that line.

Well penned poem. I loved it.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Really enjoyed the poem that reflects about the past and about moving on from it, as hard as it is!!! Always look forward to your writes :)

[Jeremy Baker]

the past has already happeend - it has no more power over you. The future is all that is left, so face it head on/

[Hotwater]

You have many ways of showing us the way love "breaks", I like, "the tree you plant in my heart", really good line there, top marks.
*bird*