Ill continue my life as your's

We are human

We have mistakes

Why do you think I’m wrong ?

While same thing with you is ok ?

Why do I feel lonely when being with you ?

And you feel satisfied and don’t need me ?

 

I walk on this road

I kissed the bench that you sat on

And when you passed

And saw this

You spit on that

And stepped on my heart

You smashed it

And never cared

And when your heart said

Uh.. I was there just to cure it

You never cared and will never care

Just like how I will move on

In my own life ….

                             29/7/2011

                              2:53 PM

Author's Note

I wrote this now and it jus came to my mind
hope ou like this :)

Reviews

[Layla Anne Massaro]

You never cared and will never care
Just like how I will move on
In my own life ….
great one! >:)))

[EMF]

Really full on. Very powerful. I liked it. Just one comment on the title. Might want to change it to 'I'll'. Though Ill has a nice touch.

[Hotwater]

You seem to have the pain of many loves and the pain of all the partings.... and we do move on.
*bird*

[brenda]

agree with review i think this was great !:)

[Lily Mae]

An intense and great expression of your emotions.. xx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great read, that is full of hurt that jumps out, I love it :)

[CyndiR]

A painful write, but i like the strong mind to move on at the end, but those things which happened in the beginning, it really painful and it also hurt me as well. I don't like things in this poem happen to anyone, cause its unacceptable to that person...
Nice Written!
~CyndiR

[Becky C Strukamp]

I feel a bit of hostility. You penned those emotions well. Nice write. I liked it.

[Jeremy Baker]

Angry and mournful. Well written!

[Thea]

Oh! I really like this! Hurtful... :(((