Destiny

Standing here

Your picture is from the right

And the sea is from my left ..

 

your shadow is above

and mine is on the sand laying

looking at yours in the sky..

 

you are my angel

That is sent straight down from heven

I walked toward the sea

I stepped in the water

I'm salty...Im wetty

 

I walked and walked

I reached a far distance

I was sinking slowely

I'm dying slowely

I was facing my destiney

And trying to reach the sun

When it was holding your picture

while setting ...

 

I faced my destiney

And died

while running over you

My only love ...

Author's Note

Just came to my heart
and my mind pure it
to write this nice words
for my greatest love

hope you like this
enjoy :))

Reviews

[MYSELF]

True love seen and a perfect transition of the sunset compared to lovely emotions...

[EMF]

Absolutley terrific. I'm wetty. You made me smile and laugh. Great work.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Simply romantic! =D I love it!! Marvelous piece! Great write!

[CyndiR]

Such a sweet and heart felt piece of writing! I love the ending most, so smooth and nice. The whole poem is really soft and Like it a lot! I really do, anyways, a great write!
~CyndiR

[Jeremy Baker]

Very romantic writing.

[brenda]

love the ending ! and the whole poem what a romantic poem *sigh*:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very sweet and heartfelt. A beautiful poem.

[Hotwater]

That is brilliant! you seem to have a magic pen!
*bird*

[Darkest Rose]

This is so sweet and a heartfelt peace.Such a amazing write :) Keep up your awesome work :)