Never give up

I'll never give up

As long as i have faith

I'll never give up

As long as I'm living ..

 

I will get you

now..Or..Later

Don't ever think

that you will come

One Day

And see me

begging on my knees

to have you back

I have my faith so I'm living on it

7/7/2011

1:27 PM 

Reviews

[Darkest Rose]

Love this! Your right if you have the faith you should never give up,amazing write.Keep the great poems coming :)

[deeps]

Yes Never give up on anything!
Enjoyed this alot.

[Thea]

Oh yeah! Don't ever give up! Love it! :)))

[CyndiR]

You're right about never give up, we shall never give up, there is always hope or so! I love the whole concept of your poem, its a very positive poem. I love the second stanza, its very powerful and strong.
Wonderful Job!
~CyndiR

[Serge]

thats very good for 17 years old.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another splendid write, love it :)