your picture

Laying on the clouds 

Your face is what i see

Is this a mirage ??

Or you are real ??

I lay on the hills 

your image is what i see

but i live for that ..

I stand beside the sea 

During the sunset

The sun draws your  image 

and the sea sings for you

the best love songs 

I made the music 

It made the song

But your soul wrote the lyrics ..

Oh..how is your face ?

Oh..It's perfect..

Or  i think you are !!

your picture is the best 

your voice is the greatest

and you are perfect ..

I do love you 

As much as i see your picture 

Author's Note

hope you like this :)
it came to my mind while i was swimming when i imaged my love beside me
so i wrote this ..
hope you like this :))

Reviews

[M.Babu]

This is magnificently sweet...

Though i think the fourth line should've been... ''Is this a mirage ?? Or are you real ??
maybe...

But the rhyme was so smooth and the message really hit home...

VERY Nicely done:)

~M.Babu~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Suhad, I totally love how you get your inspiration, and write such romantic poems, a total pleasure to read :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww... sweet! Passionate write! I love it. Beautiful. Great job!