your picture

Laying on the clouds 

Your face is what i see

Is this a mirage ??

Or you are real ??

I lay on the hills 

your image is what i see

but i live for that ..

I stand beside the sea 

During the sunset

The sun draws your  image 

and the sea sings for you

the best love songs 

I made the music 

It made the song

But your soul wrote the lyrics ..

Oh..how is your face ?

Oh..It's perfect..

Or  i think you are !!

your picture is the best 

your voice is the greatest

and you are perfect ..

I do love you 

As much as i see your picture 

Author's Note

hope you like this :)
it came to my mind while i was swimming when i imaged my love beside me
so i wrote this ..
hope you like this :))

Reviews

[Dayran]

Love draws a picture, of a picture of love.

[EMF]

You just get better and better. I never know what you'll write next or what method you'll adopt. Brilliant work

[Thea]

Wow! That's really sweet! :))

[Layla Anne Massaro]

Amazing poem! i like it very much. >:)

[WriteWiz99]

awwwww...SO SWEET!

[brenda]

aaaaaaw!!!:) *sigh* beautiful poem !:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Amazing what inspires us to write. You penned your inspirations well.