My annoying dolly

Talking...Talking 

Never stopping 

the voice goes loud 

the words increase...

Give me ..Give me 

I want this..

I want that..

All what it says ...

you are my annoying dolly ..

you look calm 

you look innocent 

but you never stop talking ..

One more word 

 and i will kill you 

One more increasing of the voice ..

and i will hit you ...

One more "give me "

and i will slain you ..

I want to hit you 

I will put you in mars 

in Jupiter.. 

In the sun 

and I'm sure 

all what you will say 

" Give me" and "I want to "

I will kill you 

if you say 

one more word ...

                                          24/6/2011

Author's Note

i wrote this for my sister ..
eventhough i love her because she is my only sister between 4 boys and she means a lot to me , but sometime she really play the role of this annoying dolly..
i wrote this for her when i was angry and she was talking and nagging :)
it happens

hope you love this :)

Reviews

[CyndiR]

I understand a lot, I have two brothers, and they are more than annoying, I just couldn't stand them, and sometime I rather have no siblings! Its just... sucks when they keep bothering u! I hope I have sister more than brothers, I want a sister so much, but i hate my brothers! Anyways, a great write!
~CyndiR

[WriteWiz99]

WOW! that must be one annoying dolly

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Amazing, very unique and love how you have expressed your annoyance, little girls can be so cheeky, very well written :)

[Sakib]

I think it's sweet. Really nice. I live far from my little sister. I really miss her. This poem reminded me of our sweet moments. I liked this. Amazing write.

[Thea]

Don't have a sibling so for me, this represents my mom perfectly! Her name is Dolly too just like in the title! Best fits your poem! Hahaha! Very well expressed! Made me smile after reading it! :)))