I made you

you think you are something

you are mistaken 

without me 

you are just a man 

that is looking for a lake 

in the middle of a desert ..

you are colorless 

you are nothing 

I colored you

I made you a real human 

Don't ever think 

that you draw the smile 

NO..NO..NO

you just shade my tears..

But know without you 

I'm a human ... I'm FREE

I'm writing my history

without you ..

Don't ever think 

that i will walk after you 

and cry over you ..

You are NOTHING now 
And I'm EVERYTHING ..

                                                                                                 30/6/2011

                                                                                                         1:59 PM 

Author's Note

i hope you like this

Reviews

[CyndiR]

Of course I do love this poem! I love the strong feeling of this poem! Emotions are powerful, and the poem is beautiful! The whole poem run really smoothly. I like the concept of this poem, and sometimes I can be as strong as the person in this poem.
Amazing Job!
~CyndiR

[Jeremy Baker]

I do - very good expression!

[EMF]

Absolutley b""""" perfect.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful piece full of passion that I really adore :)

[Thea]

Wow! Like it a lot! Filled with deep emotion... :)))