I want you back

you blame me for nothng 

you became sad for everything 

you cry for everyone 

but not me 

you hear everyone 

but you ignore me ...

What happened now 

we were friends 

what happend now??

Nothing has changed

im the same person 

you knew 

im the same peron 

that cried on your shoulder yesterday 

and you were the last piece 

in my puzzle...

you are going now 

far away from me

never want to ask or say 

a real nice word ..

i want you by my side 

real best friend 

real sister

i always want you to be 

my shadow 

and my real friend 

Author's Note

i hope you like this
just came to my mind now ....

Reviews

[Darkest Rose]

Lovely write! I can relate to this so much and I'm sure a lot of others can,it flows really well which makes it even better. :)

[kadian fraser]

i like this poem it reminds me of a person that's silented by wind and cant get through to the person and its suffocating. trust me i can relate to this

[EMF]

Love the poem, but you know me and grammar. I'm; capitalise I's, bit of punctuation. Only reason I can't go the whole 100/100. The poems great though, just needs a final polish.

[brenda]

love this favorite !:)i can relate to this a lot :)

[Thea]

I can relate to this poem...Very nicely done...Like it a lot! :)))

[Sakib]

Beautifully written. The emotion and pain; I can feel it. I can relate to it. Great job.

[Jeremy Baker]

I agree with Kim - despairing but well crafted. Good poem!

[deeps]

This is sad really, but so well expressed. I enjoyed the read.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful flowing poetry that oozes sense and emotion, wonderful :)