im for you

im for you

A Poem by stars are far

I fell for your smile once 
But im falling for you everyday 
you are killing me 
more and more 
you are hitting the target 
by your torn 
burn it ..burn me 
but leave my heart 
just to love you more 

© 2011 stars are far


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stars are far
hope you love this :)

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EMF
Passion, pain, love, raw emotion. Wonderful work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice flow, this is amazing. Also, the font draws you in, well done!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love will burn forever. Good write.
*bird*

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this so much! Great job! Short, simple, yet so much passion. Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I did love it, it was amazing.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweet, simple and lovely. I loved it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


So much passion. You did a wonderful job with this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, amazing again, love your passion you have and sense of love. Top writing as ever :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Tyre, Lebanon



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