Life

life is like a book 

Don't give up 

because of a difficult chapter

Stand for it 

and face it 

see what it contains 

and at the end 

you will see 

how much this book was entertaining 

and you will realize 

that it was only a short story 

but we feel it is difficult 

because we are only small pieces

and we are just

a small thing in that book 

like ants i this life 

like bees in our life 

we are small 

but we are very important 

because without us 

the story will not exist 

Reviews

[That Would Be Me]

There are a lot of questions worth answering in a poem like this. Many parts of literature are quite interesting when though about in terms of life. Look into that. There are many more things to explore in this poem.

I really liked the general idea. It was lighthearted, and uplifting. And when you are thinking about your life, it's much better to feel lighthearted. :) Well done.

[zoeeyx]

I love this!:) Well done

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful inspiring poem, love the use of deep thought and a positive message for everyone. Wonderful piece :)

[Clever Forever]

This is so clever, and brilliant.
Try getting your poems to flow more thoroughly, but aside from that, this is a really great poem, and I love when you say, "Don't give of because of a difficult chapter", it's very metaphoric. Well done :)

[Fontane Wong]

A really amazing description about life. I love how the way you use book to describe life, life is really like a book, every pierod is a chapter, and the whole life makes a book. This is one of my favorite piece from your writing so far.