Just a dream

I slept deeply 

I saw you 

sitting under a tree 

wearing black 

and crying 

I wanted to tauch you

But before i reached you 

I felt your hands on my shoulder 

I was freezed 

a calm song was played  

you put your hands around my waist 

and i put mine on your shouder

we were dancing alone 

and the sky was rainig flowers and hearts ...

Suddenly 

someone called my name 

I woke up

I saw your picture

beside my bed 

i took it and hugged it deeply

and im crying since that

til i forget your picture

and be sure 

that i will cry forever ...

Author's Note

just came to my mind :)

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Beautiful. So beautiful I'm beginning to wonder if this is......quote, Just a Dream...

[Becky C Strukamp]

A beautiful poem of love . There is sadness there but for the loss. the loss is because of the love. Thanks for writing and sharing.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very soulful and sadly beautiful.

[brenda]

awesome ! i can totally relate to it !:) nice poem :)

[EMF]

beautiful poem and well crafted and formed. I think it is wonderful. One typo though, maybe it should be frozen, rather then freezed. But keep 'em coming.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The way you express emtions, feelings and dreams take my breath away, a style of writing I love :)