Go with you

I wear my pink dress 

and put my best make up 

Just to see you

beside the lake in Atlanta 

when i saw you standing there 

wearing your black tie 

it was cold there 

and i was freezing 

we sat between the trees 

and you hugged me 

like im all yours 

I wanted to say 

it was the best day 

i ever had in this century 

and will ever be ..

My love 

My heart is thee

and thou art everything 

Author's Note

i never been to Atlanta but i wish i could go there with my future prince
and if i did this would be everything ...

hope you like this :)
can you give me a better title

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

The title is excellent and so is your poem. Good work. Thanks for sharing.

[brenda]

i think the tittle is just fine and this is really good i love the ending !!:)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a beautiful dreamy write, flowing with love. Atlanta, nice choice???
I would go for Atlantic City, in New Jersey lol ( a bit obscure lol).

Great poem :)

[Jeremy Baker]

I think the title is fine just as it is. I love the dreamy, wistful quality your writing has. Lovely poem!

[EMF]

Absolutley beautiful. One of your best love works. It holds the attention from top to toe end and leaves you feeling warm. You have done a great one

[Thea]

Aw, so sweet...Keep writing... ;)