what is love ?

love is not a word 

it is more than this 

when you say "i love you"

you should feel this word 

you should taste  it 

when you make me feel 

like im your princess 

and the queen of your kingdom ..

when you tauch me and make me feel 

like im your litle kitty cat ..

when you dance with me and make me feel 

like im in the heaven ..

just you and me alone 

and when you talk to me 

and make me feel like im deff for any other voices ..

My phone will wait for you 

so is yours

Oh love is so sweet

when you know how to deal with it..

So hurtful when you don't 

please  learn how to love 

and then come to my arms ..

Ill be yours 

and my world will be your eyes ..

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

Love means unwavering loyalty and damned hard work :) Take it or leave it.

[Hotwater]

Love is how you make it, it has it's ups and downs like all parts of life. Another good write.
*bird*

[alexlessah]

I love this, very nice job!

[Sakib]

I haven't felt like that yet. Maybe I haven't fallen in love yet. Nice poem!!!!

[M.Babu]

"So hurtful when you don't
please learn how to love
and then come to my arms ..
Ill be yours
and my world will be your eyes .."

I love that stanza...
The message is clear and the tone poignant...

I like this alot:)

~M.Babu~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A perfect romantic, realistic and idealistic poem :)

[Jeremy Baker]

I like the message in this, Suahd, altough there are a fair few typos. It seems to make the narrator's persona seem desperate, but not in a good way. A good pirce of writing overall -thanks for sharing it! =)