As you are

you are not the best 

but you are different ...

your eyes are not the Prettiest 

but they are my dream..

your hair is not the smoothest 

but it is the medicine for my skin ...

your body is not the greatest 

but that is you ..

The one i always dreamed with 

and live my life for ..

I can say it now 

" i love you as you are 

Not the best. greatest, or the Prettiest

but my dream "

Author's Note

im sure there are gramar mistakes but tell me where ok :)and thanks

Enjoy :)

Reviews

[Niki Wilson]

Ahh... I love this ALOT! saying that its not just Looks looks looks....!

[Lively]

Cute lines : your eyes are not the Prettiest
but they are my dream..

[deeps]

second stanza you spelt prettyest wrong. Prettiest
also last stanza too. I really enjoyed this write.

[Jeremy Baker]

This is a lovely, sweet poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This is beautiful, just the realistic touch that I like to write and read myself. Stunning piece :)

[EMF]

OK. First the spelling. Prettiest. Now the grammar. Capital I when talking about yourself. I love you as you are. o, if you are going to use mainly lower case when you write, that's fine, but don't pop in a capitalised letter at the beginning of a sentance, unless that's intended for a particular reason.
That's two things. If that's all there is don't worry about it. People know what you mean, and if they stamp their little feet stuff 'em.
Now the poem.
Perfection. A polished analysis of realistic love for a perosn.. No false illusions, no flowery sentiment. Just a perfect poem

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww. I find this poem soo sweet. Just pure love for someone, even with flaws you still love that person.. ^o^
I enjoyed reading it! ^^