My home

Behind the hills 

where the sun smiles everyday ...

where the rooster screem everyday 

with the sweet song ...

Behind the hills 

where the flowers spred there smell 

where the people are just like brothers ..

So, great and lovely ..

Behind the hills 

where the life is simple 

and the chiks are living safe 

no wars..no shouts..

just peace and laughs...

Behind the hills 

there is my home 

my family, my village 

where i belong 

and so proudly im living :)

Author's Note

think that i loved this alot :)

Reviews

[EMF]

A hypnotic work that draws you in and keeps you there, transfixed and in the place itself. Some tweaking with the grammar. J

[M.Babu]

I loved the direction of this piece...pulling the reader into a trance imagining the unseen land of tranquil. The repetition of the first lines really symphasized the meant effect. Though i think i spotted a few grammatical errors along the way. But i really liked the path you set out.
Good job.

~M.Babu~

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write, I enjoyed this write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice and positive poem, either of current situation or hope. Beautiful :)