Admit

when you are going to admit ?

that love means to you a lot 

and im every thing in your life ...

when you are going to admit ?

that you are in the prison of love 

crying over me day and night ...

when you are going to admit ?

that red flowers are in your mind 

and you are just ignoring that ...

when you are going to admit ?

that your heart is standing for your mind 

and steeling it ...

when you are going to admit ?

that everytime you see the moon 

you remember me 

and cry over my eyes ...

Don't be a laier 

just admit everything 

and you will be saved from the fire ...

Author's Note

i know that the picture is not related but i loved that :)
what do you think of the poem ?

Reviews

[Aurora Lynn]

I liked this poem! Other than a few small grammer mistakes, I thought it was fantastic. Sometimes it's hard for people to admit something like that.

[EMF]

I love the poem. Good flow and theme. Also neatly confrontational

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The flow is super and poem is right up my street :)