Our last phone call

One minuit left 

and few seconds more 

i will hang off the phone 

forever and try to move on 

without you by my side

because they thought that you are not right 

by loving me and also cry 

for the girl you loved 

this thing that you can't deny ...

Seconds are left 

your last words :

"Don't give up 

because true love stories

have happy endings

and now it's not ok

so be sure it's not the end "

The phone turned tured off

and my heart had been broken apart 

no one could feel 

this heart ache 

but im sure it hurt

more than broken bones ..

your last words 

came to me like lightning 

in a foggy day 

they are just against 

they never thought that our love 

is the soul of the earth 

that is why 

we will stay lovers 

and fight for the last breath ..

When you come back to me 

I will put the moon in your hand 

and the sun in the other one 

and write in your heart 

" love is not a war 

but it is just like 

the moon and the sun 

without them the earth can't stay alive "...

All of these things came to my mind 

when the phone turned off 

and the Torment is just started 

but im fighting for you 

and waiting for your love ..

Author's Note

it just came to my mind when i was day dreaming
but i loved this a lot
what do you think??

Reviews

[EMF]

******* brilliant. This poem caught me completley off guard and I relish it for it. Powerful and surprising, pulsing with energy. loved it.

[Daniii]

Great job

[Tasha]

This was amazing. It was filled with so much emotion!
Fantastic!!
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Lively]

Wonderful....

[deeps]

This is wonderful,
So much emotion in this write.
So nicely done!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Simply beautiful, love the plot of the last phone call, and how significant it was. How its expressed is magnificent :)