LOVE

Cupid will stuck 

a feeling that you will never ignore 

sooner or later 

you will feel 

the meaning of love 

in your heart ...

For the only days 

you will feel 

that red flowers have meanings 

you will wait for them 

and never throw them away 

not because they are flowers 

but because they are from someone 

Someone you feel that he cares for you 

someone that dream with you 

someone that really love you ...

And when your phone ring 

you get excited 

because you are expecting 

your beloved to call

if he wasn't the caller 

you feel the need to 

cry and cry 

and if it was him 

you feel thrilled

you feel the need to 

laugh and happily screem ..

you can't imagine 

what is real love 

and will not feel this love 

except when you fell in it 

and in that day be sure 

that cupid just stuck ...

Author's Note

i loved this because this feeling is the best..
hope you love this too :)

Reviews

[EMF]

Cracking verse. Real nice work with a perfect summation of early love. Grammar may use a bit of a tweak though. For example 'Cupid will stuck' to 'Cupid has stuck'.
Or I could be talking twaddle.
Small things such as that don't detract from the poem though. Thoroughly enjoyed it

[deeps]

Oh wow I simply loved this write. this is amazing

[Lively]

Good!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This is so good, the expectant phone call etc from your beloved, can make your day, wonderfully expressed :)