Ready to die

Staring at the clouds

Painting your face by the stars

Finding you in my eyes

As a picture that i always looking at

Caring you to Mars

And flying with you to Pluto

Everywhere we go I see your smile

I’ve got everything in my life

So, ready to die :’( 

Author's Note

hope you love this :)

Reviews

[EMF]

Brief and strong. A hard poem. Could use a bit of tweak with the grammar and capitalisation though on the fourth line

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love it, short and very powerful and emotional :)