you and men !!!

you and men !!!

A Poem by stars are far

Do you think 
that i will miss you ??

Do you think 
that i will remember your name ?

you are dreaming 
for having me back 

Do you think 
that i will think of you ??
off course no!!

Do you think 
that i regret my time with you ?

Don't think of this because 
I learnt a very good lesson 

< you are worthless >
     and so 
< men are worthless >

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
im not intending to be rude or something to you men
but i was just talking about the men i knew in my life ..
i think every man that try not to hurt his girlfriend is great :)

enjoy

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I'd be offended if it weren't for the fact that you're right: many men are indeed worthless and do not respect women. THey bring great discredit upon themselves and for the most part, we men deserve the poor reputation we have. The poem itself is angry, intense and volatile - bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree as a man I know men and many are indeed worthless they play a girl for what they want and when something better presents itself they leave. Love how you turn the tables on him by penning this piece of your gone stay gone poetry, the ending is wonderful, I am sure it will not cause offence in fact sure many women will applaud it lol. keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol no offence taken :) And a great emotional, can feel the anger. Top stuff :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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