Tears

Tears

A Poem by stars are far

Million tear for no one means nothing 


but one tear for me means everything 

© 2011 stars are far


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I loved what you are saying....and it probably couldn't be said any more succinctly...but I wonder if it would be better as million tear(s) and mean(s) everything....You're the poet, so your call
I'm an ex-educator..so it struck me...
Good piece
allen

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A perfect counterpoint to Smile. But one little thing leaps straight at me. I think 'mean' should read 'means'. Beyond that these two lines carry weight. I hope you have pride in what you do.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, so moving and profound :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 4, 2011
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Tyre, Lebanon



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