Try to remember

The goldfish is singing 

The trees are dancing 

But im here crying 

Over you my love...

Lots of days 

Many moments 

Have been moved 

Without you being by my side 

One more day 

One more breath 

And im dead 

One more word 

And i will be over 

Just try 

to look at my heart once 

Try to hear the voice 

that is screeming in my head

Try to gather our memories 

and you will see 

how much our days were beautiful 

how much our time was enjoyful 

how we were together

Try to remember once 

The beautiful dreams we deamed together 

and our amazing castles 

we built together ...

Please try to remember once 

how much i love you 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[EMF]

Another lovely work. Some of the imagry is terrific. PArticularly the first two lines. They made me laugh out loud. Terriffic.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another exquisite romantic write. Beautiful words indeed :)