when im going to meet you

My heart beats increase 

My hands are sweating 

My legs are moving quickly 

My eyes can't see what's in front

I saw you standing there

Under the tree 

And the tree is playing with your hair...

You looked at me 

I couldn't move 

I was freezed 

you came through me 

and cough my hands slowly

I couldn't say a word

I couldn't move a feet 

I was lost in your eyes ...

Oh..baby 

my love..my dreams 

you don't know 

What you mean to me !

you can't see 

What i feel toward you !

        I  miss you 

        I adore you 

we walked together

and we didn't stop

till the death stole our love 

and our happiness 

and put us in a prison 

titled:"No one should be in your life "

and this things

is more hurtful  than

the hill and the burning ...

Reviews

[Niki Wilson]

Execptional,Beautiful, Lovely.... Umm... I'm running out of words to describe your lovely work! iT WAS GREAT! :)

[Hotwater]

Just enjoy the way you write, very inventive. Well done.
*bird*

[EMF]

Another exceptional poem. Great imagry as ever.

[nonno noo]

Very nice! I liked "And the tree is playing with your hair". Great writing.

[Annie N.]

good job keep going!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Suhad, yet another heartfelt masterpiece as always, love the sense of location/imagery and the deep feelings. Top write : )