Do you think ??

we had a promise

"Nothing will separate us

except death"

but now you made the distance

stand between us just like an ice bridge

 

My phone misses your voice

All what he want

is to hear your voice

answering for the question:

"how are you ??"

 

Do you think that i forgot you ??

you are mistaken..

Do you think that i have no more dreams about you ??

you are mistaken..

Do you think that i have a real life without you??

you are also mistaken

 

Just waiting for you

and crying over you

and all i would like to say is

i love you

Author's Note

i hope you like this ...
i wrote that from a real broke and lost heart ...
^__^

Reviews

[Hotwater]

loads of emotion, the feelings you have come over very well. Yes I like it.
*bird*

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wonderful touching poem, love your use of questioning, very relatable:)

[Jeremy Baker]

Heartfelt and well written!

[EMF]

Cracking love poem about seperation. Just the quality and professionalism I have come to expect

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Pretty touching write. nice job.