Your shadow

Laying on my bed 

I saw your shadow 

It looked at me 

I wanted to touch you 

I ran after you

for all night long 

It ran toward the garden 

I ran...

Suddenly..

This shadow stopped

I looked at it 

the moon goes down 

the sun smiled for a new day

and i cried 

your shadow faded away 

my tears blow out from my eyes...

In the next day 

I saw your shadow again 

I stared at it and said:

" are you my love "

Only silence ...

My tears will flow 

Suddenly 

The bell rang 

I opened the door

it was you my love 

you shade my tear 

and fade my fears

and hugged me through 

and sorry was said from you

your shadow 

were gone 

and you will never move on 

without me by your side 

 I love you 

Author's Note

i loved this one

Reviews

[Droll Prole]

This poem is so pretty, visually and image wise. Well done

[EMF]

I have come to have a sinking heart when I get some read requests through. But when I realise they come from you and a handful of others I know, without a shadow of a doubt, I will not be disappointed. This poem, again, lifts me up. A woonderful piece of work.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Suhad, another wonderful poem, whoever the lucky guy is, hope he gets to read them:)

[Tasha]

I loved this one too. You did a great job. Keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra