As we wished

i wrote this when i went to sleep so i think it is a dream

Hill full of flowers 

Birds are singing 

Trees are dancing 

and thee is waiting 

for me  to come ...

Late ate night

Devils go down 

Angels go up 

and the semphoney of our love begin ...

We sat together 

Under the moon light 

and the stars are staring....

We looked at each other

You said: Im your destiny

I said : You are my choice ...

you looked at me deeply 

I looked at you sweetly 

We both said:

          I want to die with you

          and between your arms 

I couldn't resist 

the rays from your eyes 

I couldn't ignore 

the gazes in your mind 

and i couldn't say no  

to your sweet lips 

We were there alone 

in that day ...

We felt home 

all the night ...

we lied at the grass 

and when the sun raised 

we were burnt together 

 

we lived together 

we died together

and we were ripped together 

always together 

                     as we always wished 

 

Author's Note

i loved this a lot
what do you think ??

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love it. Love the flow of your poem. ^^ Beautiful and sweet. Fantastic imagery! =D Great write!

[Lively]

Lovely.

[Droll Prole]

nicely poetic, good flow. Well written

[Jeremy Baker]

Beautiful imagery. The descriptions are tender and even the ending has a sense of romanticism.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love it so much, the imagery is stunning, great write:)