Promise me

Promise me that you will be my shadow 

Promise me that we will not cry 

Promise me that we will never give up

Promise me that you will never leave me ...

When you hug me 

and feel like you are in a dream..

When you kiss me 

and feel that im yours...

When you touch me 

and feel like you are burning ...

When you miss me 

and know that im waiting for you ..

Remember that im your water 

when you are thirsty ...

Remember that im your future 

'when you feel down ..

Remember that im your blanket 

when you are cold...

These promises ...

These situations ...

These memories...

If they are always in your mind 

my heart is yours 

and my love is you !!

                                                                                   

Author's Note

i hope you love this
i wrote it at night
25/6/2011
9:26 PM

Reviews

[Yina]

Very romantic an simply beautiful!!:) I love the way you wrote this including the colors:)

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Sweet and romantic,love it...

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, i loved this! So sweet and romantic. Such yearning too.. =D Love it! Great write!

[EMF]

Nice to see the positivity in your work again. Your work seems to be led by emotion so well. This is a terrific poem in all respects. Great.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sweet and romoantic - who's the lucky boy? ;)

[GlamGirl]

I once wrote a poem like this, to the song 'Promise Me' by Dead By April.
I liked how you changed the colors of the writing too ;)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A truly amazing poem, romantic poem at its best:)

[Hotwater]

Sheer entertainment, a poem full of promise! That last stanza is brill, very well done again.
*bird*