Memories will come back

i can honestly say 

Im dreaming with you everyday 

Can't forget the day 

you went away 

i felt decay...

Im waiting for you

in the castle of our love 

im your barefoot Cinderella 

and you are my prince 

that will save me 

from my prison 

that will take me to his heart 

and live together a fairy tale ...

when you come back 

we will lay on the ground 

and Dream 

        Red flowers the sky is raining 

       Dark blue the sky is colored

kissing each other

and smoothly tauching 

we will dream together 

as we did in the past ..

But now,the only thing

that is in my head

my dream..my thoughts..our love..

that will never fade away 

and will keep the memories 

as the breath for the life 

as the wings of the butterfly 

and like the smell of the daffodils of the sky ...

Author's Note

i loved this a lot
what do you think ?

Reviews

[.......]

Wow, I am stunned, this is amazing!
So beuatiful.

[EMF]

Memories make us who we are. Some are beautiful, some not. You capture a moment of them here well Really good piece

[Sukriti Suki]

Very well written.

[Helpless]

memories....damn those painful things.... and god bless them all at once.... life is so confusing

[Hotwater]

very 'lovey dovey', it's good to dream, but then we wake up to reality, but that is life so we enjoy our dreams while we can. More good work here.
*bird*

[light and ashes]

Very sincere and enjoyable reading :]

[Lively]

LOVELY.........

[Tahna]

I really liked this!!! I liked "Im your barefoot Cinderella and you are my prince"
And I liked "My dream...my thoughts...our love" was really great too.
Fantastic piece, I really love it too :)

[GlamGirl]

Very nice writing!

"Im waiting for you
in the castle of our love
im your barefoot Cinderella"

Beautiful work!