you came back

the title doesn't fit the poem

when i saw you over there 

i wanted to stare 

and raise the flag of love my dear 

and ask you how dare you could leave ...

you left for a long time 

and came back again 

you saw the crime you did my babe 

you killed me and left the town...

you though you would see me broken 

but when you killed me 

i realized that 

myself is better than your love ...

and once again  

you looked at me 

as if you saw the devils angel  

beside the sea   

but you will never imagine

how much is my love to you !!!!! 

but be sure 

im still standing 

and i will never fall down 

because of your love ...

Author's Note

something just got to my mind as a flash, it came like a photo into my head,..
hope you love this

Reviews

[EMF]

The poem itse;f is faultless. Well written and heartfelt/ Yet it may benefit from capitalising the 'I'. Maybe more capitalising others. Could be worth considering. Great poem nevertheless.

[Tahna]

lovely poem...I can feel the emotion and I like your style you use

[Hotwater]

like it! I really like your style of writing. You put a lot of emotion into this... it just feels right.
*bird*

[.......]

I can feel your every emotion in this wonderful write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Really love this as always, the emotion and the heart shown in this poem is beautiful. Such a great pleasure to read this poem:)