i love you

Birds are flying on the way 

Daffodils are growing back again 

trees are wearing there green coats 

seeds are growing and becoming old 

and you my love 

everyday you become more young 

angels are moving

all around you

and the candles 

of our love are melting 

i thought that i will never lose you

but the wind is stronger than me 

even though 

I fought it for you 

because i love you 

and im sure 

that "i adore you "

Author's Note

it is not perfect but i loved it :)
thanks for your reviews :)

Reviews

[Lively]

Nicely expressed.........

[Hotwater]

An excellent write, your style is brilliant.
*bird*

[for my ♥]

....wonderful write, i enjoyed this

[shoaib]

its nice when you write something and you personally love the poem, even if others might not, i think thats one of the simple joys of writing. for that i applaud you ! nicely done :)

[Omar]

sweet :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Everything is reborn and the love I have for you has made me see you reborn each and every day.....Time is passing and I can't stop it no matter how hard I try, but yet I fight it with every breath because my love for you runs so deep. Beautiful piece.

[EMF]

Faultless. Filled with the optimism of Spirng

[lifesmith]

Term papers should be perfect hun, not poetry...that said, this is brilliant

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I love it also, the poetry flows so well. Your love poems are awesome indeed:)

[Jeremy Baker]

What a sweet and lovely poem!