your flower

we were walking 

under the midnight black 

your sweet words 

were flowing like rain drops 

and your sweet touch

is killing my heart ..

you gave me a flower 

and went away ...

While you were there

your flower was my sweet bed 

it talk to me everyday 

and make me feel fine ..

it touch me 

and make me feel safe ...

it was you 

when you were away...

One year passed 

On the same day , same night 

I took the flower

 and went  to the same place

where you gave me that flower

we stood at the same place 

and the last words 

I've heard from that flower 

"he hate you "

"he is not yours "

I fell on the ground 

and in that day 

I realized 

that this flower was you 

because it was also harsh 

when i hold it again 

It hurted me 

i said with my broken heart :

" the flower you gave to me 

one year before

is making me bleed now 

just like you did inside "

Author's Note

hope you love this
as i do

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Lovely and tragic.
" the flower you gave to me
one year before
is making me bleed now
just like you did inside "

[deeps]

Very emotional indeed, Heart tugging!
So very nicely done

[shoaib]

very emotional piece, i can see you were being very creative with this one, which i think is why you like it so much as well as i do... awesomeeeee

[LivingDeath]

You really know how to capture deep emotion. Great piece of writing. Very sad but captured very well.

[EMF]

You get better with each piece you do. You have several poems now all with the same theme but all totally different. Superb

[Lively]

Lovely..............

[Jeremy Baker]

Suhad, your talent and skill are growing apace. this is a masterful poem, with sensitivity and pathos perfectly mixed. Exscellent!

[.......]

Now this is a wonderful write, Love this.
especially the part in red. Amazing write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Suhad, Totally love it, the poetry is awesome, the heartbreak captured so well indeed, the last stanza just hits the message home awesomely:) Great work!