In the airport

You are going away

And my tears are running out

We were saying goodbye

In the way to the airport

We were happy/sad

Lots of emotions were going and coming inside

When we reached there

We stood for an hour

Then,

you have to go

A little sweet hug

All I felt

You went to the airplane

I couldn't say goodbye

I ran after you

I ran, and ran, and ran.

Then I saw you in the plan

With your tears

You were shocked

When you saw me there

Standing beside the plane…

We were staring at each other

Like it will be the last  time together

And we were talking by our eyes

ILL MISS YOU

My last words were

Before the plan wanted to fly

It flied and stepped in my heart

And the last words I heard

From your lips my love

NO, NO, NO… I LOVE YOU…

The plane stopped

You cough my blood

And kissed them a sweet kiss

It felt your lips

Then, I died while im happy

Because all I wanted in my life

Was to be with you

And when you were gone

I DIED …

Author's Note

i loved this one
it is just a story came into my mind
hope you like this too..

Reviews

[shoaib]

thats one thing i hate about airports... the feeling that you or someone you love is leaving... thats the worst !!!
great job on this poem, it is one of my favorites of all your writings

[EMF]

Beautifully handled, with great flow, imagry and skill. terrific

[.......]

Very touching & sincere write.
I enjoyed reading this

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I love this too, very heartfelt and touching poem. Great as always:)

[Jeremy Baker]

I can feel the longing and yearning from these words - so adroitly crafted on the page. Very well done. One minor nit pick - you have 'plan' instead of 'plane' and 'catched' instead of 'caught'. Minor typos, no doubt! The ending was particularly opignant, too. Good writing!