Like this day ..Can you remember too ??

Like this day is the last day 

I saw your eyes in 

One year ago 

you were standing here

with your confused smile..

One year before

you were saying goodbye 

t was the last goodbye from you

we didnt knew that it was..

but i can remember 

that i cried that day like a river

my room became an ocean

and my bed was the ship

I felt that .... Have you ?

I felt that we are not going to meet again 

I felt that we are saying the last goodbye .

I felt that it was the last look 

But i didnt feel that

it was the ending of our love ..

Author's Note

written from my heart
and from a real story
hope you love that

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

This seemed like you were reading out my life story.....This piece is the closest to my heart. I have no more words to express my love for this piece.

[EMF]

Pwereful and heartfelt. Can't fault it.

[.......]

emotional powerful write,
Like this alot.
There is so much feeling to it.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

'That i cried that day like a river my room became an ocean and my bed was the ship'

What a great metaphor and you sure write great love/heartbreak/romantic poems. Love it all:)

Yas