What if ??

what if the sun didn't raise again 

what if the moon didn't shine anymore 

what if the rain didn't fall anytime 

what if the sky is not blue forever..

Would the world be the same?

What if the world is out of human ?

What if the teens are old ?

What if i wasn't i ?

and you weren't you ?

Would the world be the same

what if i haven't see your eyes anymore ?

what if i never kiss your lips again ?

what if i never feel the touch of your sweet embrace ?

what if i never see your smile again ?

Would the world be the same

what if the earth didn't rotate anymore ?

and it is all water ?

Would we have ever existed ???

Author's Note

hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

The questions in the last line of every paragraph stronger the power of the whole poem and make the whole poem more supportive and true. The poem is quite philosophy to me, it's really a fantastic piece.

[.......]

Such a pondering write.
I enjoyed this one.

[paul]

i like the question form of the lines. they give an ethereal feeling and make one think. great write

[EMF]

Bleak and crushing. Beautiful and hopeful. The way you work the language is sheer perfection. Waven not written, using words, slightly askance it makes a perfect poem. Since I first read it, about half an hour ago, the phrase

What if the world ran out of human/

has bored its way into my head.

Love it

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love it, a great write full of deep philosopical questions that I love so much:)

Yas