Me at night

Crying over you
every day, every night
my tears stay awake with you
and the stars
protect me, from being alone ..

Beside the sea
The breeze
plays with the leaves of the trees
and the clouds at night
cries with me and fight
which one wants to hug me first
But finally the die on my chest ..

Stars will never shine
until giving me my beloved eyes

Crying over you
every day, every night
and all i would like to say
that you are always on my mind..

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

Another lovely, love inspired work - great writing!

[Raven Starhawk]

Sometimes the most painful tears are shed at night.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely work..!!!

[Helpless]

:'( wow..... this is an all too familiar feeling

[Jackson Lai]

Good...

[EMF]

Do you realise how good this is? How enjoyable, despite the subject matter? I won't bang on. It's superb

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Love it...

[hopelove]

i love it

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I love your style of poems, amazing:)