My idea's

Having a lot of idea's
all of them are fighting
on the door of my head
the are knocking ..

Best idea i've ever had
is to be with you.

Trying to think
about your love..
the images of you
you were moving
going far away
leaving me alone
in that dark scary place..

You left me and gone
and never try to come
to ask my tears
that were falling with fears ..

Those images showed
in front of my eyes
just like the movie of life ..

So, i stepped on this idea
and move on in my life
with my other ideas
that was away from you ...

Author's Note

Dont think it's perfect but hope you like it !!
wish from you honest reviews and thanks :-)

Reviews

[Daniel88Batson]

Lovely

[Helpless]

the ending is fabulous! great job!

[Jackson Lai]

Good idea...

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Nice...

[Yina]

This happens a lot doesn't it? It seems life will never be perfect but I guess that's how its meant to be right? This was really good though:)

[EMF]

Your right. It's not perfect. But it's damn near. Quite upseting. I think I'll keep coming back to this one. Some of the lines will stay with me a long time. Hellofa imagination and scop you have.

[Sukriti Suki]

I like the emotion behind this. A few grammatical errors but we can look past that...I am liking your style of writing.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I like it, makes so much sense, I would only add of to become 'ask of my tears'. Another wonderful poem:)