You
A Poem by
stars are far
why we should say Goodbye when we know there would be a hello Why we try to hug when we know there would be a kiss Nothing would be over when im with you no tears, no fears but only love and hugs you inspire my heart to sing to write. your love give me the words for my poem, for the story of my life it give me the image i want to paint your image is the lens of my eye your voice is the song in my ears your smell is the perfume in my nose and you are the love of my life ..
© 2011 stars are far
Author's Note
hope you love that:)
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"your image is the lens of my eye
your voice is the song in my ears
your smell is the perfume in my nose
and you are the love of my life .."
My favorite stanza in this really sweet poem!
:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
An adorable write full of that warm mushy feeling called 'love'. Great job.
Posted 13 Years Ago
An adorable write full of that warm mushy feeling called 'love'. Great job.
Cute!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Cute!
I know exactly how you feel. I love it. Definite Favorite. Will be saving this one.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I know exactly how you feel. I love it. Definite Favorite. Will be saving this one.
I hope you wrote that for someone. Awwwww
Posted 13 Years Ago
I hope you wrote that for someone. Awwwww
I love it...
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love it...
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Aww, this is beautiful :) I certainly know someone who means all this any more to me. You've done brilliantly at capturing the lovely, quirky things people say or do we they're in love :) Great work, well done :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Aww, this is beautiful :) I certainly know someone who means all this any more to me. You've done brilliantly at capturing the lovely, quirky things people say or do we they're in love :) Great work, well done :)
Good...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Good...
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
awwww i do love it!!!
especially the second line
why we try to hug
when we know there would be a kiss
so sweet!!!! wonderful poem!
Posted 13 Years Ago
awwww i do love it!!!
especially the second line
why we try to hug
when we know there would be a kiss
so sweet!!!! wonderful poem!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Romantic...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Romantic...
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 14, 2011
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stars are far Tyre, Lebanon
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