You

You

A Poem by stars are far

why we should say Goodbye
when we know there would be a hello

Why we try to hug
when we know there would be a kiss

Nothing would be over
when im with you
no tears, no fears
but only love and hugs

you inspire my heart to sing
to write.
your love give me the words
for my poem, for the story of my life
it give me the image
i want to paint

your image is the lens of my eye
your voice is the song in my ears
your smell is the perfume in my nose
and you are the love of my life ..

© 2011 stars are far


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stars are far
hope you love that:)

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"your image is the lens of my eye
your voice is the song in my ears
your smell is the perfume in my nose
and you are the love of my life .."

My favorite stanza in this really sweet poem!
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


An adorable write full of that warm mushy feeling called 'love'. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I know exactly how you feel. I love it. Definite Favorite. Will be saving this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I hope you wrote that for someone. Awwwww

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it...


Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, this is beautiful :) I certainly know someone who means all this any more to me. You've done brilliantly at capturing the lovely, quirky things people say or do we they're in love :) Great work, well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good...

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwww i do love it!!!
especially the second line

why we try to hug
when we know there would be a kiss

so sweet!!!! wonderful poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Romantic...

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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