Then why i love you ???
A Poem by
stars are far
written from my broken heart
i always ask myself what is the best thing in someone to be loved ? the answer is always the cute nice words and i agree but why i love you even though your words are like a knife that is killing my heart...
© 2011 stars are far
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Tragic and very powerful. Nice write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love it...
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love it...
Nice...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice...
So sad but true, what we miss sometimes does feel like a knife in our broken hearts....
Posted 13 Years Ago
So sad but true, what we miss sometimes does feel like a knife in our broken hearts....
Really nice..short but honest and that reaches to the reader.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Really nice..short but honest and that reaches to the reader.
I love it. The phraseology clashes, the words jar, the feelings, not good, but curiosly positive. People may recomend change. I would recomend it stays as is.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love it. The phraseology clashes, the words jar, the feelings, not good, but curiosly positive. People may recomend change. I would recomend it stays as is.
More than like it, So relatable indeed:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
More than like it, So relatable indeed:)
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Added on June 12, 2011
Last Updated on June 13, 2011
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stars are far Tyre, Lebanon
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