Then why i love you ???

Then why i love you ???

A Poem by stars are far
"

written from my broken heart

"
i always ask myself
 what is the best thing in someone to be loved ?
the answer is always the cute nice words
and i agree
but why i love you
even though your words
are like a knife that is killing my heart...

© 2011 stars are far


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stars are far
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Tragic and very powerful. Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it...


Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice...

Posted 13 Years Ago


So sad but true, what we miss sometimes does feel like a knife in our broken hearts....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really nice..short but honest and that reaches to the reader.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love it. The phraseology clashes, the words jar, the feelings, not good, but curiosly positive. People may recomend change. I would recomend it stays as is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


More than like it, So relatable indeed:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Tyre, Lebanon



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