Me with life

i never wanted to be this one
i never tried to be like someone
i never wanted to be bad
i never needed anyone
BUT NOW
im always trying to make you feel
im good but you cant agree
im now trying to be the romodel
of everyone who is entering this life
AND IM ALWAYS
wanted to be yours
wanted to stare at the croweds
that were waving for you...
I NEVER WANTED
to be who i am now
to see all what im seeing now
to say goodbye

But life is eating me
And i think now
it swallow me
and im truely over
So, Good bye to life
Goodbye to you my true friend

Reviews

[Jackson Lai]

Good writer...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very enjoyable and emotioanl read indeed. Wonderful:)

[EMF]

Don't care about punctuation. Don't care about typo's, just don't care because this poem is b******y marvelous.

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Well written...

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This one tugs, but so well written